The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart compares the popularity of each
traveling
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travelling
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mode per the average
distance
tarveled
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travelled
by people who live in England over a fifteen-year period.
Overall
, the number of individuals who chose to
travel
by car experienced by far the most important growth among all modes of transportation in England in the
last
fifteen years of the 1900s.
However
, riding a bicycle was the least
favored
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travel
mode in
this
country over the mentioned timeframe. On the one hand, the car drivers'
distance
increased dramatically from 3199
miles
in 1985 to 4806
miles
in 2000. By 2000, the second most popular
travel
modes
have been
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train and
Long
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Long-distance
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distance
bus, respectively rose by 77 and 70
miles
per person annually. Among all
different
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the different
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ways to
travel
,
taxi
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taxis
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had a negligible rise to 42
miles
in a year.
On the other hand
, the average
distance
traveled
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travelled
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by local buses decreased to 274
miles
.
Furthermore
, over 230
miles
in 2000 was walked by individuals in England, which is almost 20
miles
less than in 1985. Riding a bicycle
also
went down in the number of
miles
from 51 to 41 over the same period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words distance, travel, miles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • passenger kilometres
  • modes of travel
  • dominant mode
  • lifestyle changes
  • economic factors
  • public transportation
  • urbanization
  • improved services
  • urban planning
  • safety concerns
  • societal attitudes
  • comparative analysis
  • transportation policy
  • public adoption
  • infrastructure
  • environmental concerns
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