The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.

Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.
Delineated in the graph
is
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are
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overall
working
hours
per week among certain
professinaols
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professionals
,
whereas
individuals having
strees
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stress
streets
oriented diseases across 8 groups. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is discernible that businessmen and film creators are working relatively more
hours
than other occupations,
while
the most
effected
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affected
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professionals from stress are the lecturers. When it comes to details, in terms of the bar chart, businessmen work a considerable amount of time with 70
hours
, being the busiest professional
on
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in
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the workforce.
Conversely
, programmers, lawyers, chefs and lecturers are spending
relatively
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a relatively
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smaller number of
hours
in
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at
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the
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apply
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work, 40, 35, 30 and 25
hours
, respectively. The remaining occupations, movie creators, doctors and writers, are working 60, 50, and 45
hours
, respectively. Regarding the pie chart, a-fourth of the people suffering from
stress related
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stress-related
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illness
is
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are
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lecturers,
follewed
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followed
by movie producers with 18 % and doctors
15
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with 15
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%. Programmers are less affected occupation by
streea
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street
, indicating 5 %. The remaining is distributed among other professionals.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average hours worked
  • stress levels
  • professional groups
  • correlation
  • highest/lowest
  • reported
  • variations
  • data
  • trends
  • patterns
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