The line graph gives data about the number of users of five different communication services worldwide from 1998 to 2008.
The Line chart illustrates how many
number of
customers used communication services all over the world in five various companies between 1998 and 2008.
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Overall
, Landline
service
topped the year in the beginning but in the end, Cellular phone service
was the most dominant type .Despite this
, Fixed broadband was reported the least in their contributions.
In 1998, Landline
service
topped the year but in the end, they finished as the third most
highest users Change the adjective
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in
the end of the period. Change the preposition
at
In contrast
, Cellular phone service
started to rise from the beginning and there was a clash in the figure at 17% in 2002 with landline
service
. After that, it still continued to grow in an upward direction and hitting the top of the chart by 60% in 2008. Furthermore
, Internet service
rose from the initial stage and then
crossed the landline
service
in almost 2006 with 20% respectively. While
,
the Remove the comma
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last
one was the
fixed broadband with a stable trend until 2005 and after Correct article usage
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it
Correct pronoun usage
that it
was
increased gradually and stopped at 4% in the next three years.Unnecessary verb
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