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You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference.  Describe what this conference is about  Why you want him/her to give a presentation  Give details about the conference

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Dear Sara Smith, The company is going to schedule and hold an international conference called "Artificial Intelligence and its Applications", on Monday,
Nov
 23rd. As you have recently published 4 scientifict article in internationally recognizedjournals, managers have decidet to invite you to present your achievemnts in the confernce. It will be a 3-day meeting starting from
Nov
 23rd, there are 2 time intervals you can accept one one of the that works better for you. 1. 9: A.
M
 to 10 A.
M
, Nov24th. 2. 9: A.
M
 to 10 A.
M
, Nov25th. I look forward to confirming the assigned date and time as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, Zari Shamsa
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coherence cohesion
For coherence, ensure that each paragraph smoothly transitions to the next, maintaining flow in your writing.
coherence cohesion
To enhance cohesion, consider using more varied linking words to better connect your ideas.
task achievement
In terms of task achievement, make sure the purpose of your letter is clear and that you elaborate on every point for full comprehension.
task achievement
Maintain a professional and courteous tone throughout the letter to keep it suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively used paragraphs to organise your ideas
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter were appropriately formal and well-executed.
task achievement
Your letter responds completely to the task, including all necessary details about the conference and the invitation to present.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cordial
  • collaboration
  • overview
  • themes
  • expertise
  • accomplishments
  • audience
  • professional backgrounds
  • venue
  • schedule
  • presentation topic
  • significant
  • guidelines
  • audiovisual equipment
  • valuable contribution
  • confirmation
  • assistance
  • preparations
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