The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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The bar chart details how visitors from China, the USA, Turkey and Brazil

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their time

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Holiday in Greece in August 2019. The data reveals a clear relationship between the time spent on the activities. Turning first of all to Chinese visitors, it can be seen that reading

books

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has the biggest proportion with eight hours. Moving to the second part-time used at the beach is three hours which is less than half of reading

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the least hour compared to the other three countries. As far as the Chinese tourists are concerned, Brazilian and Turkish tourists have the same ratio for each activity. These countries prefer to go to the beach rather than reading

books

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Americans and Chinese prefer to read

books

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most time. By way of summary, from the information provided in the bar chart, it can be seen that visiting attractions has the lowest proportion of these four activities.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

average number
leisure activities
tourists
nationalities
cultural trends
interests
vacation
influence
participation
impact
weather
events
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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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Describe a tourist attraction that very few people visit but you think is interesting. What/Where the place is? What people can see there? Why only very few people visit there? And explain why you think it is interesting?

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool.Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people whoplay them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?