In universities,
are allowed to take any courses
individual preferences. It is
for
to discover and pursue their interests. Yet some suggested that courses should be limited to science and
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subjects. I disagree with
suggestion, and my opinion will be analyzed by discussing both views and
combined with my personal perspectives.
,
confining
to a few subjects can have
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contribution to human
accoomplishmentCorrect your spelling
accomplishment
accomplishments
in the long term.
,
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only
profession in
domain is not enough in the present world. To exceed competitors,
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often requires the ability to implement
concept from
field to another. For
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job recently, requires both
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from the industry and excellent data analysis ability. Two abilities can only
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individually.
, allowing
with
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flexibility in choosing what to study can help with
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general performance
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.
Studying in
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education system not only
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for human progress or academic achievements, but
soft
as observational
,
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. These are
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but are often overlooked.
important
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of becoming
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adult is to be able to think, act, and decide independently.
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more
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to choose and decide can
help them form a mature and stable mentality.
, diversity creates
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.
, if
are only permitted to study science and technology, there can be less
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since there
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no differences between the logistics in their
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.
, allowing
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to choose whatever they like can help with taking care of the invisible
that we can easily forget.
,
should be
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to study any subject they like. The world requires diversified
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in different
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that can use
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betweenChange preposition
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each
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, and only science and technology
isn'tCorrect subject-verb agreement
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enough anymore.
, having the right to choose freely allows
to develop in their own way, and differences are the main factors of creations,
, and individualities.