The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisions where relevant.
This
pie and table shows information on the police budget and shows how the money
was spent between 2017 to 2018 in an area of britain
.
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Britain
Overall
, what stands out is that there was 69 precentage
of Correct your spelling
per cent
money
spent for
buildings and transport and in Change preposition
on
Add an article
the table
a table
table
the first place Add a comma
table,
at
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as
source
of Correct article usage
a source
budget
is Add an article
the budget
a budget
National
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the National
Governmet
with 175.5m and the Correct your spelling
Government
last
of
place is other sources with 38m in 2017.
In Change preposition
apply
term
of budget , Fix the agreement mistake
terms
National
government started at 175.5m in 2017 and Correct article usage
the National
finish
at 177.8 in 2018,Wrong verb form
finished
that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
most
number of Add an article
the most
other source
, in Change the wording
another source
other sources
second
level is Local Taxes Add an article
the second
is rise
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is risen
is rising
almost
10 Change preposition
by almost
m
in couple years
.
In Change preposition
of years
pie
there was stable for buildings and transport Add a comma
pie,
while
money
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the money
of
technology was 8% in 2017 but Change preposition
for
in2018
it was dramatical rise to 14% .salaries Correct your spelling
in 2018
is
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are
most
amount of Add an article
the most
money
that
spent and it was 75% in 2017 and it decreased to 69% in 2018.and in the end buildings and transport Correct pronoun usage
apply
staied
at 17% in 2 years.Correct your spelling
stayed
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