the graph below shows in percentage terms the changing attern of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main feartures, and make comparisons where relavant
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. The given line graph illustrates a variation in household access to four modern technologies in homes in the UK in percentage values between the
years
1996 to 2003 .
Overall
, the availability of CD
players
, mobile phones and home computers in the domestic environment had a steady rise during the whole period . Although
,internet access appeared later it also
rose steadily. Furthermore
, CD
players
were recorded ,as the modern device
with the highest home accessibility throughout the period.
In detail, CD
players
were the highest popular modern device
in the houses in the years
1996/97 with 60 % in percentage while
that amount climbed up gradually to just over 80% in the years
2002/2003. Home computers, although
,recorded a near 30% in 1996/97 similarly
followed the same gradual increase as CD
players
throughout the period to reach just over 50% in the years
2002/03.
Moreover
, mobile phones were the least available device
in the domestic environment in 1996/97 with just below 20% of the household ,but it
became the second most popular Correct pronoun usage
they
device
in 2002/03 with a value of around 70%. However
,till 1998/1999 there was a gradual rise in the accessibility of it domestically to just below 30% and then
the level surged near to 45% within the next year and was followed by a slight increase in the level till 2000/2001. After that, it rose significantly during the first half of the next year , followed by a gradual growth to post approximately 70% availability in houses in the year 2002/2003.Submitted by dinaka0001 on
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