The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph displays the level of films released and the level of
ticket
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purchases between 1996 and 2006 in a nation.
Overall
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, the number of films released and
ticket
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sales increased significantly in the 12-year period.
Between
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Of
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the four genres that are reported, almost all of them increased steadily except for the
romance
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category
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which remain constant in the
amount
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number
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of films launched and declined in the
ticket
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revenue report. The drama
category
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dominated the film launch chart by just over 25% in 1996, which
then
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rose to exactly 35% in 2006, and still became the most released
genre
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throughout the period. Comedy and fantasy
also
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climbed the graph to approximately an
averageof
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average of
5%. Despite
this
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, only
romance
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stayed the same
in
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at
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just above 5%.
While
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one chart dominated by the drama
genre
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, the percentage of theatre
ticket
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profits towered over by the comedy
category
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which received just under 25% of revenue in 2006 after it increased from exactly 20%. The other
category
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also
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shows increasing,
besides
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romance
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declined to under 5%.
Romance
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was the only
genre
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that declined over time,
while
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the other
genre
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received more numbers for both film releases and
also
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ticket
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sales.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words ticket, romance, category, genre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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