The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph displays the level of films released and the level of

ticket

purchases between 1996 and 2006 in a nation.

Overall

, the number of films released and

ticket

sales increased significantly in the 12-year period.

Between

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show examples

the four genres that are reported, almost all of them increased steadily except for the

romance

category

which remain constant in the

amount

Change the quantifier

number

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of films launched and declined in the

ticket

revenue report. The drama

category

dominated the film launch chart by just over 25% in 1996, which

then

rose to exactly 35% in 2006, and still became the most released

genre

throughout the period. Comedy and fantasy

also

climbed the graph to approximately an

averageof

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average of

5%. Despite

this

, only

romance

stayed the same

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show examples

just above 5%.

While

one chart dominated by the drama

genre

, the percentage of theatre

ticket

profits towered over by the comedy

category

which received just under 25% of revenue in 2006 after it increased from exactly 20%. The other

category

also

shows increasing,

besides

romance

declined to under 5%.

Romance

was the only

genre

that declined over time,

while

the other

genre

received more numbers for both film releases and

also

ticket

sales.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ticket, romance, category, genre with synonyms.

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