The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate
cement
manufacturing and the method of mixing concrete by using Use synonyms
cement
to produce it for construction purposes.
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Overall
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it is clear that
there are two main processes for getting concrete for building objectives. The process begins with getting Linking Words
cement
ready and ends with mixing concrete.
In the first place, limestone and mud, which are collected from their sources, will be spread on their trays before crushing by a two-wheeled crusher. Powder, an outcome of the previous stage, passes through a mixer and will be heated in a rotating heater which rotates all the time in order to let a flame Use synonyms
reaches
every single particle. Correct subject-verb agreement
reach
Consequently
, the high-temperature dust moves along on the roller way to the grinder to grind them into fine particles, called Linking Words
cement
. After that, it will be packed in the bags ready for delivery.
In the second place, Use synonyms
the
concrete production needs two main forms of material that are solid (sand, Correct article usage
apply
cement
and small stones called gravel) and liquid. In one batch, Use synonyms
it
will use 15% of Correct pronoun usage
we
cement
, 25% of sand, 50% of gravel and 10% of water as a binder for solids. Use synonyms
Thereafter
, all materials will be mixed in the concrete mixer which rotates all the time Linking Words
while
pouring components.Linking Words
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