The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by

The first illustration depicts how a normal Australian household

use

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their

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its

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energy

. The second graph illustrates how

this

energy

use

affected greenhouse

gas

emissions

. An

overall

examination indicates that heating spends the most amount of

energy

but it is not the most

influencial

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influential

task. As mentioned, heating provides 42% of the total 100%,

However

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it only takes up 15% of

emissions

. Water heating comes second with 30%

use

, and only goes up by 2% on the other chart. refrigeration holds 7% but

suprisingly

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surprisingly

this

amount doubles

on

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apply

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the greenhouse

gas

emissions

. The data

being

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similar in lighting sources of 4% turning into 8%. The lowest consumption of

energy

belongs to cooling with a mere 2% share and 3% on

the

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apply

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gas

emissions

. The rest of the 100%, Other appliance

energy

use

only makes up 15%, yet

this

amount almost gets twice as much in the

australian

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Australian

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households

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households'

household's

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green

gas

emissions

.