The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 – 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an everage school day in the UK.
The diagram illustrates the number of
time
that boys and Fix the agreement mistake
times
girls
who are 10-15-year-olds enjoy chatting online and playing on games
consoles on an Change the noun form
game
everage
school day in the UK. Correct your spelling
average
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Overall
games
is more popular than chatting on the Internet. However
, there are specific differences of
using time between boys and Change preposition
in
girls
.
It is clear from the figures of the chart that 85% lads
spend time on Change preposition
of lads
games
while
55% chat
online. In addition
, most of them play games
every day more
than one Change preposition
for more
hours
and 10% do for more than 4 Fix the agreement mistake
hour
hours
.
By contrast
, girls
prefer making
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having
conversation
online. Fix the agreement mistake
conversations
According to
the bar chart, almost 70% engage in online chat
each day, compared to 51% on games
consoles. Of this
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this girl
these girls
girls
playing game
, most of them spend less than one hour, Fix the agreement mistake
games
whereas
most girls
who chat
online do so for more than one hours
, and nearly 10% Fix the agreement mistake
hour
chat
for four hours
or so.Submitted by duyuyen18 on
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