The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 – 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 – 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.
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The diagram illustrates the number of times that boys and
girls
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who are 10 to 15 years old enjoy chatting online and playing computer
games
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during school days in the UK.
Overall
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, playing
games
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is more popular than chatting on the Internet.
However
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, there are specific differences in using time between boys and
girls
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. It is clear from the figures of the chart that 85% of lads spend time on
games
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while
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55%
chat
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online.
In addition
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, most of them play
games
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every day for more than one hour and 10% do for more than 4 hours.
By contrast
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,
girls
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prefer having conversations online.
According to
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the bar chart, almost 70% engage in online
chat
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each day, compared to 51% on
games
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consoles. Of the
girls
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who play on consoles, most of them spend less than one hour,
whereas
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most
girls
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who
chat
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online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10%
chat
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for four hours or so.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words girls, games, chat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adolescents
  • chatting online
  • games consoles
  • average school day
  • time allocation
  • social interaction
  • gaming habits
  • internet usage
  • preference
  • daily patterns
  • peak times
  • weekdays
  • weekends
  • gender differences
  • trends
  • implications
  • social skills
  • physical health
  • academic performance
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