The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams illustrate the differences between the
water
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cycle in forests and cities. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that both cyclical natural illustrations have 6 main stages, beginning with evaporation and transpiration and culminating in runoff. First of all,
water
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starts to evaporate in forested areas ,and at the same time, the transpiration phase occurs.
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, after the condensation process, evaporated
water
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turns into precipitation and rains from the clouds. In the next stage, during the infiltration phase,
water
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undergoes permeable and less permeable soil layers, and
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, flows through baseflow which results in runoff. In terms of soil erosion in urban areas,
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, reduced evaporation and transpiration levels happen.
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, the purification of
water
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declines in cities which may bring about the baseflow reduction.
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, decreased amounts in the aforementioned stages lead to an increase in land degradation which can cause high numbers of pollutants within soil.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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