The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph delineates information about the average monthly
temperature
in New York in 6 months
in 2012. In addition
, the bar chart gives data about the total amount of money
received on bathing suit sales in this
city over the period.
Overall
, the average temperature
witnessed an upward trend in 6 months
until reaching its peak in the last
surveyed month. By contrast
, the total money
from selling bathing suits bucked the trend, however
, it was reported that the amount of money
from these sales was the highest in April.
More specifically, in January, New York was reported to have an average temperature
of over 30 Fahrenheit before dropping slightly to 30 Fahrenheit in the next month. Over the next 5 months
, the average monthly temperature
fluctuated with an increase before peaking at roughly 65 Fahrenheit in the last
month.
Regarding the remaining features, in January, the total amount of money
received on bathing suit sales was 100$, this
number rose nearly threefold in the next 3 months
before dropping significantly in the last
2 months
of the periodSubmitted by lamdactuanga on
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