The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented graphs depict the data about

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the trip

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trip

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trips

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from and to

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the UK

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and about the most visitable

countries

for

dwellers

. As is observed from the given data, it is evident that both the visits abroad by

residents and the visits to the

by overseas community members witnessed an upward trend respectively;

however

, abroad

trip

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trips

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that

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done by

dwellers

saw the most significant rate.

Additionally

, in stark contrast to Turkey, France displayed a completely different trend, becoming the most popular country

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visited by

residents. Commencing in 1979, the rate of foreign residents visiting the

standing

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stood

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at 10

millions

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million

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people and

increasing

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gradually within the following years

which

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reached a peak of just under 30

millions

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million

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in 1999.

Likewise

, the number of

dwellers

who visited foreign

countries

saw an increase, starting at just above 10

millions

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million

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and

inclined

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increased

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in 1984 as their rate amounted to 20

millions

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million

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before skyrocketing

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a little more than 50

million

. The bar chart presents the 5

favorites

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countries

visited by

dwellers

While

Spain and France saw the two most visitable

countries

as their rates amounted to nearly 9

million

and a little more than 10

million

respectively, Greece and Turkey witnessed the 2 least popular among the 5

countries

which both of them visited by less than 5

million

visitors.

Additionally

USA

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the USA

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had a moderate number of

visitors, accounting for just around 4

millions

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million

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visitors.

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