The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph provides data on the amount of packages delivered between 1920

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2000 by 2 main mail distribution companies.

Overall

, TNT one of the two services has been on a steady rise,

However

, their counterpart has fluctuated over time and was the more successful one. In the first decade, TNT delivered just above 5000 mails and gradually grew and maintained

this

form until 1980 with approximately 10000 deliveries, almost doubling in 60 years.

However

, between 1980 to 2000 a significant jump appeared, hitting a peak of just below 25000.

On the other hand

, FedEx was delivering triple the amount in 1920. Gradually inclining to 25000 in 1940 which was its peak. But it dropped dramatically just in 20 years, still leading compared to their counterpart with a small advantage and climbed their way up to around 20000.

Nevertheless

, they were overtaken by their rivals in 1990 and maintained the same level ever since.

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