The pie charts below show unit of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The given pie charts illustrate the variation in the volume of
electricity
production
by utilizing various fuel sources in two particular countries Australia and France in 1980 and in 2000.
Whereas
, the latter pie charts depict the same in France in a simi time period.
In 1980, the total production
of electricity
by leveraging various fuel sources in Australia is
100 Wrong verb form
was
units
. However
, in 2000 it showed a dramatic rise by generating 170 units
. Two decades earlier from the year 2000, coal was the main source of electricity
production
and half of the electricity
was fabricated from coal. Moreover
, the contribution of coal dramatically increased to 130 units
after two decades. In 1980, the fuel source, natural gas and hydropower took their place in production
with similar inputs which is 20 units
. Additionally
, the influence of hydropower in the year 2000 is spectacularly raised to 36 units
. While
the input of natural gas is fluctuated
to 2 Change to the active voice
fluctuates
has fluctuated
units
.
Nuclear power was not employed in Australia as a source for producing electricity
. On the contrary
, in France, The use of nuclear power significantly increased to 126 units
in 2000. However
, before 20 years it generated just 15 units
in a particular area. Both natural gas and coal together produced half of the electricity
in 1980.Submitted by insighttribez on
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