The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table illustrates the number
of commuter employment in four different states in 2003 and 2006 and the rate of people
work
per 1000 Wrong verb form
working
people
in 2006.
In general, the number
of commuter workers
in four countries from different continents increased in 2006 compared to 2003.
Almost 600 thousand
people
who worked in the USA in 2003 were temporary migrant workers
. This
number
was the highest among three
others. Meanwhile, New Zealand Correct article usage
the three
was
only accounted for 65 Unnecessary verb
apply
thousand
in that year. Australia and the United Kingdom had a slightly different rate of that
migrant employees, around 15 Correct determiner usage
apply
thousand
more people
lived in Australia.
This
same pattern occurred in 2006 while
the USA still became the first place of
commuter Change preposition
for
workers
to live. But, in 2006 the number
of those workers
in Australia had been overtaken by the UK, which was
accounted for 266 Unnecessary verb
apply
thousand
people
. Meanwhile, per 1000 people
in New Zealand there were about 21 people
who worked as temporary migrant workers
which was quite high.Submitted by srsdy008 on
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