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The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.
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The maps highlight data about the transformations which were taken place in
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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 in three separate years (1962, 1985 and 2024).
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that the size of
Meadowside
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village
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 has expanded and merged
together with
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Fonton
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.
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, housing, amenities and buildings have been introduced to the public. Looking into detail, in 1962, there was no
road
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 that could create a link between a town and a rural area.
Meadowside
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 had a narrow
road
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, which was in the west of the
village
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,
while
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Fonton
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 had a railway line that was in the east of the
village
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. In 1985, the
road
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 which connected the
village
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 with the town had been constructed and
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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 experienced a significant growth in size. In the west of the area, housing and a
super-store
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 have been built at the same time. Nowadays, there is no divided place between
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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, as a new business park and hotel have been created at the bottom of the city. As for a business park, it is located in the south of the
road
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.
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, a new train station has been introduced to the public which is between a station and
Fonton
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, fonton, village, road with synonyms.
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