The line chart shows different U.S. energy consumption from 1980 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant."

The line chart shows different U.S. energy consumption from 1980 to  2030.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant."
What has been depicted in
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graph is the consumption of energy in the United States in 1980,
along with
future projections for 2030.
Overall
, throughout the whole time frame, the energy consumption of petrol and oil ranked
first,
whereas
hydropower stood
last
in the amount allocated. From 1990 to 2020, Petrol and oil
has
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a rising trend, ranging from 35
quadrillion
to 45
quadrillion
and it is estimated that it will increase in half
to
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the end of the period.
Moreover
,
in
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at
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the beginning of the period, coal and natural gas followed an almost pattern, starting the point at
two- fifth
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two-fifth
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and 16
quadrillion
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respectively,
finishing
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and finishing
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at around 25
quadrillion
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in 2020.
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, it is predicted that the former will 
continues
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its trend, which is third- fifth,
while
the latter will remain unchanged, at 25
quadrillion
. Over the given period,
although
nuclear, solar/ wind and hydropower
stared
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at around 4
quadrillion
and
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, followed by solar and wind were at around 5q in 2010 ,
while
hydropower
experience
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a drop slightly and it projected that it will reach under the initial values.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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