The line chart shows different U.S. energy consumption from 1980 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant."
What has been depicted in
line
graph is the consumption of energy in the United States in 1980, Add an article
the line
along with
future projections for 2030.Overall
, throughout the whole time frame, the energy consumption of petrol and oil ranked first,
whereas
hydropower stood last
in the amount allocated.
From 1990 to 2020, Petrol and oil has
a rising trend, ranging from 35 Wrong verb form
had
quadrillion
to 45 quadrillion
and it is estimated that it will increase in half to
the end of the period. Change preposition
by
Moreover
, in
the beginning of the period, coal and natural gas followed an almost pattern, starting the point at Change the preposition
at
two- fifth
and 16 Correct your spelling
two-fifth
quadrillion
respectively, Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
finishing
at around 25 Correct word choice
and finishing
quadrillion
in 2020. Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
In addition
, it is predicted that the former will continues
its trend, which is third- fifth, Wrong verb form
continue
while
the latter will remain unchanged, at 25 quadrillion
.
Over the given period, although
nuclear, solar/ wind and hydropower stared
at around 4 Correct your spelling
started
quadrillion
and
, followed by solar and wind were at around 5q in 2010 , Correct word choice
apply
while
hydropower experience
a drop slightly and it projected that it will reach under the initial values.Wrong verb form
experienced
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