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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make omparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make omparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph outlines
production
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the production
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 and
consumption
 of electricity
of
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in
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top
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the top
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ten
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10
 countries around the world in
year
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the year
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 2014. From the general trend it can be seen that all 9 countries are producing more electric
power
 and their
consumption
 is less but in
case
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the case
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 of
Germany
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Germany,
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 their
power
 utilization is more than
power
consumption
. In 2014 China was the biggest producer with 5,398 billion
KWh
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kWh
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 and next to
this
 United
states
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States
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 stood second with 4,009 billion
KWh
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kWh
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 per annum. Russia and Japan are almost generating
same
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the same
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 electricity per year. France, Brazil and Germany are
also
 producing
enogh
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enough
power
 supply
such
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on the other hand
 in relation to
consummption
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consumption
 patterns the biggest consumers are China and
United
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the United
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ststes
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states
. Russia is consuming
same
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the same
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 amount as producing. India and Canada are the only countries
who
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that
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 are generating more
power
 and consuming less.
Consumption
of
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in
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 Germany is more and production is less. In conclusion, China and
United
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the United
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states
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States
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 are
biggest
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the biggest
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 producers and consumers and Korea is
on
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in
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 10th number with
least
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the least
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 production.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • leading country
  • ranking differences
  • significant gaps
  • regional trends
  • sustainability
  • energy efficiency
  • renewable energy sources
  • top ten countries
  • implications
  • dominate
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