The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrate the number of graduates and postgraduates who attend part-time jobs, voluntary careers,
further
studies and unemployment after finishing college in the United Kingdom in 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
both graduate and postgraduate students decide to further
their studies. However
, they are not interested in being a volunteer.
On the one hand, in the year 2008, there were 29665 graduates in Great Britain who went to further
study. The number of learners doing part-time and unemployment registered 17735 and 16235 respectively, besides
it was more than students who worked as a volunteer nearly five times which was at 3500.
On the other hand
, further
study of the UK postgraduates in 2008 remained in the
first place with 2725, followed by Correct article usage
apply
non
full-time Correct word choice
apply
job
which the gap between the first place and second place was about 200. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Additionally
, unemployment and voluntary work of postgraduates were ten times less than graduates.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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