The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The charts provide information regarding the ranking of countries that produce and consume
electricity
, presented in billions of kWh, in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
nine out of ten countries have higher
production
than their consumption.
Conversely
, Germany was the only one consuming more
electricity
than it produced.
To begin
with, China led among other countries with the highest
production
at 5,398 and used around 5,322.
Subsequently
, the United States took second place with a fairly high number, similar to China, generating 4,099 and consuming 3,866.
On the other hand
, Russia, as the third-ranked country, has a considerable difference of around 1,000 between its
production
and consumption.
Furthermore
, Japan was recorded in fourth place, followed by India, Canada, France, and Brazil, resulting in
electricity
at approximately 500 to 900 and use at 450 to 800.
In contrast
,
electricity
consumption in Germany was greater than its
production
by about 500. The least amount was produced by the Republic of Korea at around 485 and used at about 450.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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