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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
#hours #work #week #people #categories #activities #childcare #home #housework
The bar chart below displays the average
hours
 of free job
for
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per
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 week done by citizens in different categories.
Overall
, X
represent
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category
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a category
the category
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 of
men
 and
women
: without
children
, with 1-2
children
, and with 3+
children
 in the family and Y represents the number of
hours
 these females and males do for free in
this
 bar chart. There are two lines that show married
women
 with a blue
color
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colour
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 and married
men
 with a red
color
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colour
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. There are 30
hours
 that married
women
 do and nearly 20
hours
 married
men
 do in
category
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the category
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 of married
men
 and married
women
 without
children
. Meanwhile, there are almost 50
hours
 of nonpaid work that
average
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the average
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women
 do, which is more than in
previous
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the previous
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 section in
"with
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the "with
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 1-2
children
" part. But
hours
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the hours
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 of
men
do
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apply
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in
this
 part did not change at all. There are 60
hours
 of unpaid work including childcare in the home, housework and gardening that married
women
 do in
"with
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the "with
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 3+
children
" section. Meanwhile, in
family
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families
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 with 3+
children
men
 of the family do only 17
hours
 of housework.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, men, women, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • demographics
  • household responsibilities
  • societal expectations
  • norms
  • childcare
  • housework
  • gardening
  • contributions
  • family structure
  • cultural implications
  • social implications
  • work-life balance
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