The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The chart illustrates the global output of different types of
games
from 2000 to 2006
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gaming held the lowest rating among Linking Words
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. The most valuable was handled from the start in 2002 with 11 Use synonyms
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increased significantly to 2003 13 Use synonyms
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, in 2004 and 2005 Linking Words
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