The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture depicts the changes in
UK's
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the UK's

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energy
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production economy from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, there are 3 main
source
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sources

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,
such
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as petroleum, coal and natural gas. The vertical bar
show
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shows

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the
energy
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units and the horizontal bar
contain
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contains

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5 different points of time from 1981 to 2000. First of all, we can easily recognize Petroleum, which was the highest all the time.
Started
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from approximately 90
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unit
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units

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in 1981, it grew dramatically to 140
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unit
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units

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during 5 years,
then
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fall
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fell

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back to 100
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unit
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units

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in 1991. After that, Petroleum's
unit
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began to
rose
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steadily until 2000. Another vital
energy
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source is Coal,
began
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which began

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at 80
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unit
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units

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in 1981.
Although
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a
drastical
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drop occurred, it soon went up to 60
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unit
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units

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in 1986. From that point on, Coal's
energy
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unit
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units

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slowly decreased to 25
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unit
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units

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in 2000. And
last
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but not least, is Natural Gas. At
first,
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Natural Gas went through 10 years without any big change.
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, from 1991 to 2000, it went up quickly and reached 100
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unit
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units

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in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, unit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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