The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture depicts the changes in
UK's
Correct article usage
the UK's
energy
production economy from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, there are 3 main source
, Change to a plural noun
sources
such
as petroleum, coal and natural gas. The vertical bar show
the Change the verb form
shows
energy
units and the horizontal bar contain
5 different points of time from 1981 to 2000.
First of all, we can easily recognize Petroleum, which was the highest all the time. Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
Started
from approximately 90 Wrong verb form
Starting
unit
in 1981, it grew dramatically to 140 Fix the agreement mistake
units
unit
during 5 years, Fix the agreement mistake
units
then
fall
back to 100 Wrong verb form
fell
unit
in 1991. After that, Petroleum's Fix the agreement mistake
units
unit
began to rose
steadily until 2000. Another vital Wrong verb form
rise
energy
source is Coal, began
at 80 Correct pronoun usage
which began
unit
in 1981. Fix the agreement mistake
units
Although
a drastical
drop occurred, it soon went up to 60 Correct your spelling
drastic
unit
in 1986. From that point on, Coal's Fix the agreement mistake
units
energy
unit
slowly decreased to 25 Fix the agreement mistake
units
unit
in 2000.
And Fix the agreement mistake
units
last
but not least, is Natural Gas. At first,
Natural Gas went through 10 years without any big change. However
, from 1991 to 2000, it went up quickly and reached 100 unit
in 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
units
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