The debate whether a country should treat foreign
arts
as its own has been a contentious argument. Proponents of foreign
arts
believe that there are no boundaries in
art
and every
art
museum should present both foreign
as well as
local
arts
equally.
However
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and maintain that a museum and
art
gallery should give priority to showcase
artworks
from artists within the country. In
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this
belief is delineated.
First,
the proportion of local
arts
presented in an
art
institution is
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proportionate
proportional
to the financial gain and reputation gain of the
artist
.
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well-known and well-connected. It is well established that a new
artist
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that is
non-conductive for creative activities
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financial status of being a fresh-graduate
artist
. Without support and promotion from
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and galleries, there is a high chance that young
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need to switch to a different career path, causing a
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drop in both
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and quantity of local
artworks
.
This
led to another consequence, which affected not only individuals but
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nation. Nowadays, local
arts
are usually advertised as one of the reasons for tourists to come to a city. The deterioration of local
artworks
due to
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can cause a large drop in
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of tourism, a consequence of which is a loss in the city budget.
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for foreign
artworks
can be a
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sword. On one hand, it can promote
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understanding of
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, it leads to the eradication of native cultures, especially the ones that are not heavily in trend or promoted. In Vietnam, many
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are gradually disappearing, as the youth is more
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on outside culture. These priceless cultures are being replaced by foreign, popular
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,
such
as Korean music from the trendy group Blank Pink.
In conclusion,
although
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to be treated with love and care, I still believe that
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, especially museums and galleries, should subsidize and promote our local artists more.
This
will bring benefits not only to the
artist
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but
also
to a nation's cultural landscape and budget.