The pie charts provide information about the proportion of three kind of nutrients included in common meals in the USA. These nutrients might be harmful when eaten pretty often.

General overview of the pie charts representing the proportion of harmful nutrients in common

meals

- fats, sugars, and salts. Each pie chart insists

of

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used amounts in all

meals

such

as

Breakfast

, Lunch, and ...

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on the sodium and

salt

charts,

dinner

contains the most mentioned ingredients which

is

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can be an

alaram

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alarm

for

the

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society. The community needs to be aware of

this

dangerous fact and try to find a way to reduce it.

On the other hand

, added

sugar

is the most frequently used ingredient in snacks.

This

fact might be one of the basic reasons

of

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existence

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of overweight people in the USA. The second big part of

these

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this

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pie chart

presents

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shows

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that

salt

and fat are being used in lunch more

that

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than

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breakfast

and snacks.

Although

it's not healthy to use the

above mentioned

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ingredients a lot

but

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still it's better to have them

in

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for

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lunch or

breakfast

rather than

in

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dinner

. The reason behind

this

statement is that

poeple

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people

will have enough time to exercise and burn the extra fat and

salt

before they

o

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go

to bed

in

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the

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night. Again artificial

sugar

is being used in

dinner

in the second place in

dinner

meals

after Snacks.

This

is

also

one the other reasons

of

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having overweight majorities in the country. Those people who take dinners with added

sugar

,

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have no time to burn it before the day ends.

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took me by surprise that why these harmful nutrients are not being used in

breakfast

the most. Because it's the

firt

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first

meal in the day and it will be eaten before work, study or any other activities. In my

opinion

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the USA

health

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Health

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and

food

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Food

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organization need to take

an

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action and change the routines in a way that people use fat,

salt

and

sugar

mostly in

breakfast

meals

in order to have enough energy to continue the day and

also

have enough time to have at least one hour of doing different types of sports.

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conclusion,

peolpe

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people

need to be taught about the

consecuences

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consequences

of using these components by teaching

childrenin

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children in

schools, health advertisements on

bilboards

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boards

on

street

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,

TV

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on TV

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and radio

programms

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programmes

programs

or

other

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in other

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useful ways.

Beside

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this

, the

governmnet

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government

also

has to teach

the

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society to take advantage of substitute organic elements that have

less

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fewer

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disadvantages for

body

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.