The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail 

services companies from 1920 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how many parcels were sent over the course of the 80-year period from 1920 by Federal Express and
TNT
Mail Services.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of services FedEx did varied consistently whilst those of
TNT
almost followed an upward trend throughout the period. For
TNT
company, there were little over 5000 packages delivered in 1920 before the figure experienced a gradual increase in the next 50 years to reach roughly 12,000 in 1960.
Afterward
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, the
number
remained relatively stable after 2 decades, though there were small changes. Eventually, in the
last
20 years, the amount of mail
TNT
sent went up dramatically to the peak of around 25000, which was nearly five times over what it was at the start of the period.
On the other hand
, FedEx started with a tripled
number
compared to
TNT
and was followed by a considerable growth to the highest point of approximately 24,000 in 1940.
However
, 1950 came with an abrupt decrease of over ten thousand and continued to go down to a low, which was almost equal to the figure for
TNT
ten years later.
Then
, the
number
grew again before
leveling
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off at nearly 18,000 parcels.
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