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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between ons per perso Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between ons per perso Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given Picture depicts the information
of
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on
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Production
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the Production
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 of co₂ by one individual in the
UK
,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal during the period
of
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between
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 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 and
Sweden
 showed
decline
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a decline
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,
whereas
 Italy
as well as
 Portugal indicated growth In carbon dioxide as time
pass away
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passed
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. In 1967,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 was the
one
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apply
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country, which produced the highest amount of
co2
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CO2
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by
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around 10.5 metric
tonnes
 followed by
Sweden
 approximately at 8.2
tonnes
.
However
, in 1977 the Production in
Sweden
 Swelled Significantly and Stayed above 10
tonnes
, after that, it tumbled
down
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drastically and reached below 6
materic
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metric
tonnes
 in 2007. The
Uk
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UK
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also
 indicated decline growth and Stayed at roughly 8.3
tonnes
.
According to
 the chart, not only Italy but
aiso
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also
 Portugal indicated
upward
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an upward
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 trend. In 1967,
Portugal
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Portugal's
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 Production of CO2 Started at nearly 1.8 metric
tonnes
 and rose greatly till 2007 and reached
at
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apply
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the Same level
of
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as
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Sweden
 which was below 6
tonnes
. Just same as Portugal,
the
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apply
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Italy
Showed
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Had
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same
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the same
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increasement
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increase
 from 4.1
tonnes
 in 1967 to nearly 7.8 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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