The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart below illustrates average incomes by city in
UK
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the UK
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. It
explain
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the number of people in
this
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sample and
average
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the average
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salary. On the whole, we can see that the salary gap among the
cities
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in England is significant,
while
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Scotland
cities
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have almost the same average. One of the noticeable points to note is that the salaries of London and Cambridge, which are both England
cities
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, are higher than other
cities
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. Specifically, there are 33,634 in London, followed by 29,854 in Cambridge. Interestingly, there are almost the same incomes in Bristol in England and Edinburgh in Scotland,
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they are in different regions. Looking more closely, the number of
salary
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salaries
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is approximately 27,500 in both two
cities
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. The final point to note is that Manchester, Glasgow and Birmingham have lower
income
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incomes
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than all other
cities
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. The lowest is Birmingham at 25,531, followed by Manchester at 25,909 and Glasgow at 26,150.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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