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The charts below show how global water resources are distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show how global water resources are distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graphs
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 the two kinds of
water
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 resources and the use of
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 in three countries. In general, most of the
water
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 in the world comes from saline
water
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. The distribution of
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 has
different
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 pattern in each nation. As the data informs, the major resource of
water
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 is saline
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, which
accounted
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 for 97.50% of total
water
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 in the world, the rest is fresh
water
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.
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fresh
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freshwater
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water
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 consists of some distinct types, almost 70% of it is frozen
water
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while
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 one-third is fresh underground
water
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 and the least ones are fresh renewable
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 and underground ice, recorded at 0.30% and 0,90%, respectively. The way
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distributed
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 for each country
are
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 not similar.
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, in the Middle
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 40-50% of
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 is used for agriculture. Meanwhile, in
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Canady,
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Canady
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Canada
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 the priority
used
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 of
water
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 is for industry, above 40%. The common pattern for
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 three countries
are
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 they use
least
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 portion of
water
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 for household needs which is no more than 20%.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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