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The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students amid university graduates in different Canadian states among 2001 and 2006.

The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students amid university graduates in different Canadian states among 2001 and 2006.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of variations of international graduates from 8 different states of Canada over
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 period.
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, it is apparent that apart from Alberta, the proportion of global
students
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 has decreased from 2001 to 2006 and the state of New Brunswick accounted for most
students
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 over the whole period. Looking into detail, the figures for New Brunswick and Nova Scotia had a superiority over others, which stood at approximately 7% in 2001,
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 increased to 12% and 11%, respectively.
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, Manitoba, Newfoundland, and Ontario were responsible for the least amount in
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percentages of
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, who were international, which all started below 5%, which was followed by a two-time rise in 2006. As regards the
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, the percentage of international
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 in Quebec was almost 6%,
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 rose to 7-8%,
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 the figure for British Columbia was over 10% in 2006, which was 3 times as high as that
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in 2001.
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, Alberta was the only state that witnessed a slight decline to under 5% during the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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