The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time. 
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illustrates the

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of passengers between 2000 and 2009. Meanwhile, the second

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depicts the proportion of trains running

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compared with

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target.

Overall

, the

number

of train passengers and the proportion of

train

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trains

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running to the target

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gradually increased.

According to

the first

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, the

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of train passengers started from a bit of 35 and ended up in about 42.

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from about 40 to 35 in the

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2002 to 2003. After that, a major increase

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between 2023 and 2005 which came from 35 to more than 45.

According to

the second

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, the proportion of trains running on time to the target started from 92

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and ended up

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97

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. There was a rebound where the

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of trains running on time fell to 92

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in the year 2006.

However

, it had increased significantly from 92 to 97 between 2006 and 2008