The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the modification plan of the Bunborough village between the present day and the 2024 prediction.
Overall
, it is clear that
new facilities and accommodations will be set in while
some of them will be demolished.
To begin
with, A new shortcut to Bunborough village is going to be built and there will be two new hotels which are going to spring up along this
new path, as well as
the old route at the top will be expanded. A new railway from Lynwich is constructed and it passes through the village to the right side of Bunborough. All shops and four houses in downtown
area will remain untouched in 2024.
Add an article
the downtown
Additionally
, old two houses which are located to the south of the old road will be relocated to the opposite side and there is a new residence on the top right intersection of the railway and the old pathway. Furthermore
, two of old
fishing ports, the left and the middle ones, will be obliterated and replaced by a new long promenade which is located by the sealine.Correct article usage
the old
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