The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the modification plan of the Bunborough village between the present day and the 2024 prediction.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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new facilities and accommodations will be set in
while
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some of them will be demolished.
To begin
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with, A new shortcut to Bunborough village is going to be built and there will be two new hotels which are going to spring up along
this
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new path,
as well as
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the old route at the top will be expanded. A new railway from Lynwich is constructed and it passes through the village to the right side of Bunborough. All shops and four houses in
downtown
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the downtown
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area will remain untouched in 2024.
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, old two houses which are located to the south of the old road will be relocated to the opposite side and there is a new residence on the top right intersection of the railway and the old pathway.
Furthermore
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, two of
old
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fishing ports, the left and the middle ones, will be obliterated and replaced by a new long promenade which is located by the sealine.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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