The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
The pie charts give information about the
proportion
of degrees granted in terms of professions (Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business) at the National University in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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Overall
, Computer Science's degree Linking Words
proportion
increased over the shown period in the charts. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the percentage of business degrees steadily decline over the 2 decades. Linking Words
In addition
, Medicine and Law changed the trends twice Linking Words
at
the same period.
Turning to the data in more detail, in 1990, the degree percentage of Computer Science started to 30% and increasedChange preposition
in
5
% every 10 years in 2000, and 2010 respectively. Change preposition
by 5
On the other hand
, Business degree proportions decreased during two decades, Linking Words
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at 30% but Wrong verb form
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fallen
20% and eventually Wrong verb form
falling
prossessed
15% in 2010.
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processed
possessed
Moreover
, Medicine's Linking Words
proportion
grew Use synonyms
at
30% in 2000Change preposition
to
,
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25% in 1990 and 2010. Change preposition
of
Additionally
, the smallest amount of Linking Words
proportion
was Law over the two decades, 15%, 10%, and 15% respectively.Use synonyms
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