The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.

The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
The pie charts give information about the
proportion
of degrees granted in terms of professions (Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business) at the National University in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall
, Computer Science's degree
proportion
increased over the shown period in the charts.
In contrast
, the percentage of business degrees steadily decline over the 2 decades.
In addition
, Medicine and Law changed the trends twice
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the same period. Turning to the data in more detail, in 1990, the degree percentage of Computer Science started to 30% and increased
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% every 10 years in 2000, and 2010 respectively.
On the other hand
, Business degree proportions decreased during two decades,
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at 30% but
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20% and eventually
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15% in 2010.
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, Medicine's
proportion
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30% in 2000
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same
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25% in 1990 and 2010.
Additionally
, the smallest amount of
proportion
was Law over the two decades, 15%, 10%, and 15% respectively.
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