The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts illustrate the percentages of
energy
consumption
and electricity generation in the
last
year. On the whole, coal and gas accounted for high rates in both charts. Speaking of total world
energy
consumption
, oil was the most popular than any other way
last
year. Looking more closely, oil was at 34.3% and it was over 15 times more than hydro which is the lowest in all
energy
consumption
except other. Following that, coal was at 25.1%, gas was at 20.9%, and nuclear was at 6.5%.
On the other hand
, oil was not popular and it was the second lowest in all electricity generation way.
In contrast
, coal and gas were higher than any others and it was at 39.8% and 19.6% respectively. Interestingly, hydro and nuclear have the high and same proportion , despite they both accounted for
low
Correct article usage
a low
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rate in the
energy
consumption
chart. Specifically, they were at around 16% in
this
chart.
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