The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents data about the
number
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of
passengers
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had used the
Paris
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metro
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station
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between 6:00 to 22:00.
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, the figures for the
Paris
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metro
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station
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had considerable fluctuations during the day.
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, the total
number
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of
users
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of the
Paris
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metro
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station
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was higher before 14:00 than after that. At 8:00, the
number
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of
metro
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passengers
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in
Paris
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hit an all-time high,
while
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the population of
metro
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users
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was at its lowest at 6:00 and 16:00. Starting at 100
passengers
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at 6 o'clock, the population of
passengers
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quadrupled at 8:00. Since
then
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, the
number
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of commuters experienced a sharp decline to just below 200 at 10:00, followed by an small rise to more than 200
passengers
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at 11:00. At 12:00, the population of the
Paris
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metro
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station
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's
users
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stood at about 300 person, increasing by roughly a hundred person from 11:00. Between 12:00 to 14:00, the figures for
metro
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users
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remained the same at around 300
passengers
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. From 14:00 to 16:00, the
number
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of individuals using the
metro
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in
Paris
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plummeted to 100.
Then
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the
number
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of people using the
Paris
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metro
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station
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skyrocketed by 300 from 100 at 16:00 to approximately 400 at 18:00. After 18:00, the situation reversed and the
Paris
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metro
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's
passengers
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dropped enormously to again 100, followed by a little increase to almost 180 person in one hour later. Eventually, in the
last
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working hour of the
Paris
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metro
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station
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, just 120
passengers
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used
this
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, paris, metro, station, users with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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