You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph represents data about the
number
of
passengers
had used the
Paris
metro
station
between 6:00 to 22:00.
Overall
, the figures for the
Paris
metro
station
had considerable fluctuations during the day.
However
, the total
number
of
users
of the
Paris
metro
station
was higher before 14:00 than after that. At 8:00, the
number
of
metro
passengers
in
Paris
hit an all-time high,
while
the population of
metro
users
was at its lowest at 6:00 and 16:00. Starting at 100
passengers
at 6 o'clock, the population of
passengers
quadrupled at 8:00. Since
then
, the
number
of commuters experienced a sharp decline to just below 200 at 10:00, followed by an small rise to more than 200
passengers
at 11:00. At 12:00, the population of the
Paris
metro
station
's
users
stood at about 300 person, increasing by roughly a hundred person from 11:00. Between 12:00 to 14:00, the figures for
metro
users
remained the same at around 300
passengers
. From 14:00 to 16:00, the
number
of individuals using the
metro
in
Paris
plummeted to 100.
Then
the
number
of people using the
Paris
metro
station
skyrocketed by 300 from 100 at 16:00 to approximately 400 at 18:00. After 18:00, the situation reversed and the
Paris
metro
's
passengers
dropped enormously to again 100, followed by a little increase to almost 180 person in one hour later. Eventually, in the
last
working hour of the
Paris
metro
station
, just 120
passengers
used
this
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, paris, metro, station, users with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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