the chart shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates the findings of research on
coffee
and tea consumption in several cities in Australia.
Overall
, the majority of people prefer to drink and buy their coffee
or tea when in a cafe. However
, the demand for fresh coffee
is relatively low in all five cities.
Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart all share a similar pattern of consuming these beverages. To elaborate, in all three cities, around 60 per cent
of the residents went to a cafe to buy tea or coffee
in the last
4 weeks. While
around 55 per cent
of Hobrats' population has preferred instant coffee
over the previous 4 weeks, Brisbane and Sydney stand at over 50 and around 45 per cent
respectively. Additionally
, about 45 per cent
of Sydney and Melbourne residents drank their coffee
fresh as well as
lower than 40 per cent
of Hobrats' citizens.
On the other hand
, Brisbane and Adelaide haven't had a significant number as the three previous places. While
over half of Brisbanes citizens take either instant coffee
or buy one from a cafe, these numbers among the people in Adelaide in roughly beneath 50 out of 100. However
, they both have a rate of around 35 per cent
of fresh coffee
drinkers in the city.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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