the chart shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the findings of research on
coffee
and tea consumption in several cities in Australia.
Overall
, the majority of people prefer to drink and buy their
coffee
or tea when in a cafe.
However
, the demand for fresh
coffee
is relatively low in all five cities. Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart all share a similar pattern of consuming these beverages. To elaborate, in all three cities, around 60 per
cent
of the residents went to a cafe to buy tea or
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks.
While
around 55 per
cent
of Hobrats' population has preferred instant
coffee
over the previous 4 weeks, Brisbane and Sydney stand at over 50 and around 45 per
cent
respectively.
Additionally
, about 45 per
cent
of Sydney and Melbourne residents drank their
coffee
fresh
as well as
lower than 40 per
cent
of Hobrats' citizens.
On the other hand
, Brisbane and Adelaide haven't had a significant number as the three previous places.
While
over half of Brisbanes citizens take either instant
coffee
or buy one from a cafe, these numbers among the people in Adelaide in roughly beneath 50 out of 100.
However
, they both have a rate of around 35 per
cent
of fresh
coffee
drinkers in the city.
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