the chart shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates the findings of research on
coffee
and tea consumption in several cities in Australia.
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Overall
, the majority of people prefer to drink and buy their Linking Words
coffee
or tea when in a cafe. Use synonyms
However
, the demand for fresh Linking Words
coffee
is relatively low in all five cities.
Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart all share a similar pattern of consuming these beverages. To elaborate, in all three cities, around 60 per Use synonyms
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of the residents went to a cafe to buy tea or Use synonyms
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4 weeks. Linking Words
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around 55 per Linking Words
cent
of Hobrats' population has preferred instant Use synonyms
coffee
over the previous 4 weeks, Brisbane and Sydney stand at over 50 and around 45 per Use synonyms
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, about 45 per Linking Words
cent
of Sydney and Melbourne residents drank their Use synonyms
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as well as
lower than 40 per Linking Words
cent
of Hobrats' citizens.
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On the other hand
, Brisbane and Adelaide haven't had a significant number as the three previous places. Linking Words
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over half of Brisbanes citizens take either instant Linking Words
coffee
or buy one from a cafe, these numbers among the people in Adelaide in roughly beneath 50 out of 100. Use synonyms
However
, they both have a rate of around 35 per Linking Words
cent
of fresh Use synonyms
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drinkers in the city.Use synonyms
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