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Last week, you lost your luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the characteristics of what you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you need from them Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#week #luggage #holiday #travel #insurance #manager #company #characteristics #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to show my concern regarding the
luggage
i
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 have lost
while
 travelling from
punjab
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Punjab
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 to
delhi
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Delhi
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 yesterday. As
i
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 have travelling insurance from your company,
i
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 would like
ypu
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you
 to take some investigation
on
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this
 or
comensate
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compensate
compensates
 my value of
luggage
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. Here,
i
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 will explain how
i
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 lost my
luggage
 as i booked flair airlines from
punjab
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 to
delhi
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Delhi
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 which
is
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 supposed to depart at 11:30 am and
i
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 checked in
before
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an hour at the airport but one crew member informed me that
flight
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the flight
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is
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 half an hour late so, i need to wait.
however
,
i
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 waited there and
get
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 into the flight at 12:00pm. it was 1 hour travelling and when i dropped at delhi airport , i was searching for my
luggage
 and didt find it. I went to the reception area as i got panic. i had all the important documents and my laptop in the
luggage
. they reported
this
 incident to flight members but was not able to help me out finding mu bag .
Therefore
, i am contacting you to get my
luggage
 as i have important stuff in the bag. hope ypu will take
this
 into consideration and contact me as soon as possible Your Faithfully Kiran
Submitted by kiranrattu.kr on

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greeting and closing
Starting your letter with 'Dear Sir,' is appropriate, but consider using 'Dear Sir or Madam,' if the gender of the manager is unknown to make your greeting more inclusive.
logical structure
You conveyed the situation and your needs clearly but could improve by organizing your thoughts more coherently, ensuring each paragraph has a clear topic.
complete response
Remember to check your letter for grammatical mistakes and typographical errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
complete response
Consider detailing exactly what you expect from the insurance company (e.g., reimbursement, specific assistance), to make your request clearer.
complete response
You did a good job detailing how you lost your luggage, which helps in understanding the context.
task achievement
You expressed your urgent need for assistance clearly, which is crucial for the task.
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