The process diagram illustrates the manufacturing of bricks for the building industry in seven steps.

The process diagram illustrates the manufacturing of bricks for the building industry in seven steps.
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The picture below indicates the process of
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bricks
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brick
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production for
building
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the building
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industry in seven steps.
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, the
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bricks making
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brick-making
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process
starta
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starts
start
from
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with
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digging the earth
by
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with
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a digger and ends in packaging and
put
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putting
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in the track for delivery. The process starts
from
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with
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digging
clay
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by
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with
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a digger
then
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the
clay
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goes to a roller after that, some water and sand mix with the
clay
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next the
clay
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is going to be
cutted
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cut
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regularly and
then
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clay
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will be
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is
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put in a mould to be formed in the fourth step those raw
bricks
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will be put in a drying oven for 24 up to 48 hours after that
bricke
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brick
bricks
are
transfered
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transferred
transformed
in to
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into
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three stages oven that in the first
bricks
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are put into moderate temperature
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then
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than
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high and in the end goes for cooling. Now
bricvks
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bricks
are ready and going to be packaged and
lastly
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put n the track to be delivered.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrates
  • manufacturing
  • building industry
  • raw materials
  • preparation
  • kneading
  • uniformity
  • shaping
  • molds
  • drying
  • moisture
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • harden
  • cooling
  • cracking
  • quality checking
  • packaging
  • shipping
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