The process diagram illustrates the manufacturing of bricks for the building industry in seven steps.
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Use synonyms
bricks
production for Fix the agreement mistake
brick
building
industry in seven steps.
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the building
Overall
, the Linking Words
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bricks making
process Correct your spelling
brick-making
starta
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starts
start
from
digging the earth Change preposition
with
by
a digger and ends in packaging and Change preposition
with
put
in the track for delivery.
The process starts Wrong verb form
putting
from
digging Change preposition
with
clay
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by
a digger Change preposition
with
then
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clay
goes to a roller after that, some water and sand mix with the Use synonyms
clay
next the Use synonyms
clay
is going to be Use synonyms
cutted
regularly and Correct your spelling
cut
then
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clay
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will be
put in a mould to be formed in the fourth step those raw Wrong verb form
is
bricks
will be put in a drying oven for 24 up to 48 hours after that Use synonyms
bricke
are Correct your spelling
brick
bricks
transfered
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transferred
transformed
in to
three stages oven that in the first Join the words
into
bricks
are put into moderate temperature Use synonyms
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then
high and in the end goes for cooling. Now Replace the word
than
bricvks
are ready and going to be packaged and Correct your spelling
bricks
lastly
put n the track to be delivered.Linking Words
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