the diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

the diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
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The picture illustrates the process of how geothermal energy turns into
electricity
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. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, the process consists of five stages starting with pumping down cold
water
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, heating it, pumping up hot
water
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, converting the
steam
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, and culminating with using the
steam
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in a turbine and producing
electricity
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. First of all, cold
water
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, which is stored in the container, is pumped down 4,5 km deep beneath of
earth’
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surface through the well.
Next,
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cold
water
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is injected from the well into the geothermal zone which includes hot rocks. Here, the cold
water
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is heated within hot rocks.
Subsequently
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, the superheated
water
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is pumped above ground with the production well and
entered
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the condenser. Here,
this
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water
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turns to
steam
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after implementing pressure. After that, the
steam
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passes through the turbine where it can be powered by rotating.
This
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spinning turbine powers the generator which is connected to it to create
electricity
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.
Finally
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, the
electricity
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generated is delivered to the power grid through power lines.
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