the diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The picture illustrates the process of how geothermal energy turns into
electricity
.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the process consists of five stages starting with pumping down cold Linking Words
water
, heating it, pumping up hot Use synonyms
water
, converting the Use synonyms
steam
, and culminating with using the Use synonyms
steam
in a turbine and producing Use synonyms
electricity
.
First of all, cold Use synonyms
water
, which is stored in the container, is pumped down 4,5 km deep beneath of Use synonyms
earth’
surface through the well. Change noun form
earth’s
Next,
cold Linking Words
water
is injected from the well into the geothermal zone which includes hot rocks. Here, the cold Use synonyms
water
is heated within hot rocks.
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Subsequently
, the superheated Linking Words
water
is pumped above ground with the production well and Use synonyms
entered
the condenser. Here, Wrong verb form
enters
this
Linking Words
water
turns to Use synonyms
steam
after implementing pressure. After that, the Use synonyms
steam
passes through the turbine where it can be powered by rotating. Use synonyms
This
spinning turbine powers the generator which is connected to it to create Linking Words
electricity
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
electricity
generated is delivered to the power grid through power lines.Use synonyms
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