The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the types of
energy
from several sources between 1985 and 2003. Overall
, the major source of energy
is oil while
the
Hydrogen and other renewable Correct article usage
apply
energy
are the least.
The use of oil was the highest in 1985 and it remain
the significant source in 2003 even if the percentage decreased slightly from 52% to 39%. Nuclear was the second highest type of source in 1985 with 22% but it was replaced by natural gas in 2003 (23%), where Wrong verb form
remained
the
nuclear had 17% only.
The use of coal and other renewable Correct article usage
apply
energy
had
increased substantially. For coal, it increased from 8% to 13%. For other renewable, it had increased 4 times. Wrong verb form
has
Finally
, the percentage of Hydrogen remain
unchanged which was 4%.Wrong verb form
remained
Submitted by unknown on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!