The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. T
The first picture
display
the current layout of Islip town Change the verb form
displays
centre
,and the second picture illustrate
some proposed changes in the future.
As can be seen, a Change the verb form
illustrates
pedestrians
is planned to Change the noun form
pedestrian
be construct
, and a new Change the verb form
be constructed
road
for vehicle
is planned for framing Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
this
area. At that time,threre
are Correct your spelling
there
proposition
for more modern facilities and housing.
Looking at the information in more detail for Fix the agreement mistake
propositions
current
map,the town Add an article
the current
centre
is develop
around a main Change the verb form
is developing
is developed
road
,which strenches
from the west to the east.There are many shops to the north and to the south of the Correct your spelling
stretches
road
.Whilst it is
mainly Unnecessary verb
apply
consisted
of the countryside in the north,a big area is occupied by housing in the south.
Moving on to the predictions,a circular Wrong verb form
consists
road
that goes around the city centre
attracts attention.This
road
expeted
to be Correct your spelling
expected
bulit
is a dual carriageway.The middle part of the main Correct your spelling
built
road
is projected to be pedstrainised
.Shop in the part is planned to be demolished and a shopping Correct your spelling
pedestrianised
pedestrianized
centre
and a housing area forecast to be introduced.Submitted by zora840810 on
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