You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In

todays

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today's

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world, it is achievable that most amount of

school

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schools

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can provide

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a completely

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completely

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complete

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muti-education

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education

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. but in

this

case, a group of individuals

convinced

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that

thay

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they

must

to

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apply

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always work on the major subject.

While

, the others argue that students need to focus on some living skills

such

as the

fuction

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function

in

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of

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different

food

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foods

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and how to cook them. Personally, I

am slightly

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slightly agree

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agree

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agree on

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the

letter

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view. It is undeniable that school

is build

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for

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to

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study

the

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basic academic knowledge and prepare to face the

highly

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goal

as

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of

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university and career in future.

Study

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Studying

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those living

skill

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skills

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may disturb the

student

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student's

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practice

the

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of the

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main subject

due to

the energy is not enough to support both

work

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works

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.

Additionally

,

teacher

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teachers

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are doing extra work in cooking

class

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classes

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.

For example

, they have

responsibility

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a responsibility

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to clean the

kithchen

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kitchen

and buy raw

food

for cooking.

Although

study

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the study

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is play

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plays

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significant

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role in

student's

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a student's

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future,

but

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apply

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people can not

leave

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live

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without

food

. There are several

reason

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reasons

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that

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apply

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why kids need to learn to prepare

the

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apply

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food

in school.

Firstly

, cooking is

more

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apply

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cheaper than restaurant, which can save money. and you can cook

food

that you want to eat at any time.

Secondlly

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Secondly

, It is

more easy

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easier

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to

considered

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consider

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the

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apply

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junk

food

and

health

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healthy

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dish

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dishes

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when you

learned

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learn

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those

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apply

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food

science knowledge. In conclusion, learning those living

skill

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skills

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is

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apply

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outweight

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outweigh

outweighed

the academic

subject

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subjects

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.