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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
#line #visits #uk #bar #countries #residents #information #features #comparisons
The given charts depict information
of
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about
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 native People
travetes
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travelling
 all around the world
in
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to
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 different nations in 1999,
as well as
 other
touristes
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tourists
 who visited
UK
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the UK
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 between 1979 to 1999.
Overall
, it can be seen from the Chart that, native individuals were more in numbers to explore other countries as
compare
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compared
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 to the Visitors of the
UK
.
In addition
, locals of the
UK
 like
most
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apply
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to visit France.
According to
 the line graph, from 1979 to around 1986, below 20
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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dwellers of the
UK
traveled
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travelled
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other
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to other
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 nations.
Furthermore
, it
shoot
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 up like a rocket and
at the end
 of 1999, reached
at
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approximately 52
millions
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million
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.
However
, foreigners Were visited
Under
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by Under
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 11
millions
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million
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 till roughly 1986 and
then
 increased gradually and Stayed at Over 25
millions
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million
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. In 1999, the most
noteable
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notable
noticeable
 Point,
the
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France had the highest tourist of
UK
 dwellers around 11
millions
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million
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 followed by
spain
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Spain
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, USA, Greece and Turkey
by
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with
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aproximately
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approximately
 8
millions
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million
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, 4
millions
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million
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, 3
millions
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million
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 and 2
millions
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million
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. The USA, Greece and Turkey
not
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do not
did not
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 even cross 5 million of the
UK
 natives in
term
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terms
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for
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of
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traveling
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travelling
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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