The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps show how the manufacturing quarter in Norbiton town looks now and proposals for the
planned
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plan
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the factories will replace the housing in the future and,
moreover
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, will construct different kinds of facilities around the district. Nowadays farmland which is located
on
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in
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the middle north part of the river will move to the East,
instead
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of
this
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housing and
road
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, which will divide the river to the right and left.
Although
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, the
road
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will develop and expand in the next few decades. The factory which is located on the west-south side of the district at the corner of Circle
Road
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will be restored to the shops and in front of
this
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the medical centre will be constructed in the prospective. On the
west - north
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west-north
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part of the
road
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will
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a will
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be built a playground between two houses.
However
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, in the eventual, there will be a school on the west side of the area.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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