The pie charts below show the form of transportation to work normally used by workers in a particular city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the form of transportation to work normally used by workers in a particular city.

   Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
5. The pie chart shows the percentage of transport
using
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used
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by workers in Rockingham in 2005 and 2015. In 2005 the most popular type of transport was
car
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a car
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. 50% of workers used
car
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a car
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went to the work. And at least was walk and bicycle only 5% chose
this
type of transportation to go to
the
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apply
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work. The percentage of transport
using
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used
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by
worker
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workers
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has significantly no
changes
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changed
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from 2007 to 2015
,
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because
car
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cars
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stay
also
most
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the most
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popular.
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