The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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cane
must be grown for 12 to 18 months before it harvests. There are two ways to harvest the Use synonyms
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cane
, use the truck or cut by the farmer manually. After that, crush the Use synonyms
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cane
by the machine until it turns to juice. If it is ready, purify the juice through a limestone filter.
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Subsequently
, to make the syrup, the next stage is to evaporate the juice in a container. Make sure the fire is hot enough to get the perfect result. After the evaporation, it will generate the centrifuge where the Linking Words
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