The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The image illustrates how
sugar
is produced from sugar
cane
to sugar
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the cycle consists of seven distinct phases, commencing with growing the sugar
cane
and progressing towards drying and cooling the sugar
.
Firstly
, the sugar
cane
must be grown for 12 to 18 months before it harvests. There are two ways to harvest the sugar
cane
, use the truck or cut by the farmer manually. After that, crush the sugar
cane
by the machine until it turns to juice. If it is ready, purify the juice through a limestone filter.
Subsequently
, to make the syrup, the next stage is to evaporate the juice in a container. Make sure the fire is hot enough to get the perfect result. After the evaporation, it will generate the centrifuge where the sugar
crystals will separate from the syrup. In the last
process, the sugar
will be dried and
cooled and ready for consumption.Correct word choice
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